I am thinking about self publishing a short story on Amazon that I wrote some years ago. I will have to change it a bit but not much. The story is on my blog site in two parts. I will need to edit it and create some chapters by innings. I think. What I want is some opinions from you guys first. Don't hold back.

The Giants and the Phillies.

The Giants and the Phillies...The last inning.

"Old phone guys never die, they just get locked in some closet with an old phone system and forgotten about"

Retired, taking photographs and hoping to fly one of my many kites.