"Its all about our dedication to quality customer care that has enabled us to provide countless businesses with the finest sales, service and support for their telephone system."

Would read better:

Our dedication to quality customer care has enabled us to provide countless businesses with the finest sales, service and support for their telephone systems.

In addition, in the second graph it should be “flawlessly”.


[This message has been edited by chuck (edited March 20, 2005).]