Is that backboard fire-rated or is there a protective coating to bring it to firerated standards?
I see a ground on the system but is it brought to a proper ground point? are you sure that EMT is grounded properly?
I can't tell if the data rack is grounded either.
I would hate having that data rack as it is a non-swing out, but that is just personnal preference.
the 25pr going to the DSX was already there and I was running out of room due to change orders
I would have replaced the 25 pair with a length that was servicable.
Judging by the mention of existing cable already run, I assume the station cabling was already in place and terminated. As a note, comming up from the bottom means coming up from the bottom of the board, to allow for additional blocks to be installed. If cable lenght was an issue, then come down from the top, and make all cables come down from the top and then run Xconnects across the bottom.
what cable is that that is all wadded up that is going to (paging?) form the biscuit jack? if just a standard line cord, cut it to length.
I would grade the voice side a C+, over all C-.
SInce I don;t know what you had to to start with, I couldn't grade on a curve.